Your critique was so brutal, witty and complete that I actually stopped reading halfway through it. As a former English teacher, I give your writing style an absolute A and thank you for it. If I had ever had a student write well as a “juvenile you,” I might not have quit. Have you ever pored over hundreds of high schooler journals and tried to make encouraging comments so they didn’t light their journals on fire?’
Your literary and cinematic references reminded me of my decline since Google entered my life: zero retention of information learned in an earlier life. I am ashamed.
Thank God I was able to find one teeny weeny edit: it’s always “all right,” believe it or not. Now I feel useful again.
BTW: “Avante-garde” is French for weird, creepy bullshyytte. (Algo dodge there.)
I’ll love you forever until you misuse “comprise” by writing “comprised OF….” instead of “composed of….” or place an ending period outside a quote-ended sentence.
Thank you for your writing. Truly gives me hope that the art is not dying out yet. If you ever use AI, I will know the craft is dead.
But how did the wife like it, lol?
I've got to see it now. Great commentary.
Your critique was so brutal, witty and complete that I actually stopped reading halfway through it. As a former English teacher, I give your writing style an absolute A and thank you for it. If I had ever had a student write well as a “juvenile you,” I might not have quit. Have you ever pored over hundreds of high schooler journals and tried to make encouraging comments so they didn’t light their journals on fire?’
Your literary and cinematic references reminded me of my decline since Google entered my life: zero retention of information learned in an earlier life. I am ashamed.
Thank God I was able to find one teeny weeny edit: it’s always “all right,” believe it or not. Now I feel useful again.
BTW: “Avante-garde” is French for weird, creepy bullshyytte. (Algo dodge there.)
I’ll love you forever until you misuse “comprise” by writing “comprised OF….” instead of “composed of….” or place an ending period outside a quote-ended sentence.
Thank you for your writing. Truly gives me hope that the art is not dying out yet. If you ever use AI, I will know the craft is dead.
Mr. Thompson, what do you make of moviegoers who find the film entertaining and worth watching?